tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5299773562524402730.post3050899569998555513..comments2023-10-29T00:45:59.199-07:00Comments on Meditative Meanderings: Nov PAD Challenge Day 8Susanne Barretthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12773089562677921118noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5299773562524402730.post-78923788105943526832010-11-12T13:22:47.915-08:002010-11-12T13:22:47.915-08:00I'm with Kath about the "days gleaning ou...I'm with Kath about the "days gleaning our hours," but there is a LOT to like here. I especially love the tightness of the sounds. The internal rhyme and alliteration start to overwhelm me toward the end, and I want to read the third and fourth stanzas out loud.Marcus Goodyearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07255781957722144278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5299773562524402730.post-18001357173005078352010-11-12T12:05:46.256-08:002010-11-12T12:05:46.256-08:00This is just gorgeous. So glad to find you through...This is just gorgeous. So glad to find you through High Calling Blogs! I'm one of the Welcome Editors and really, really enjoyed your poem. I will be back to read more, for sure!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5299773562524402730.post-33521149627016072932010-11-12T05:46:19.588-08:002010-11-12T05:46:19.588-08:00Dear Susanne
Very beautiful.. the imagery of snow ...Dear Susanne<br />Very beautiful.. the imagery of snow quilting in your words<br /><br />Do you remember<br />when snow quilted our meadow,<br /><br />was perfect.. thanks for sharing..<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />Twitter: @VerseEveryDay<br />Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5299773562524402730.post-29952435460766066772010-11-10T17:05:18.249-08:002010-11-10T17:05:18.249-08:00This is such strong, evocative writing, Susanne. I...This is such strong, evocative writing, Susanne. I love the premise.<br />VictoriaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5299773562524402730.post-29365318573212870542010-11-10T16:27:48.103-08:002010-11-10T16:27:48.103-08:00Love the repitition and flow of this beautiful poe...Love the repitition and flow of this beautiful poem...thought provoking and wonderfully written!<br />:-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5299773562524402730.post-10178375390879122962010-11-10T13:48:33.708-08:002010-11-10T13:48:33.708-08:00Of course I remember you, (takes quick peek at nam...Of course I remember you, (takes quick peek at name tag) Suzanne!<br /><br />(LOL!)<br /><br />A nice One Shot (and whatever else)Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5299773562524402730.post-77605794057470108132010-11-10T13:28:36.363-08:002010-11-10T13:28:36.363-08:00Solid work.Solid work.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5299773562524402730.post-48642204486807115132010-11-10T13:09:07.309-08:002010-11-10T13:09:07.309-08:00Thank you, everyone, for your kind comments. I tre...Thank you, everyone, for your kind comments. I treasure each of them. I have followed the blogtrails and found most of your work, too--and your richness of expression and depth of thought and emotion are stunning. <br /><br />Thank you again for stopping by.Susanne Barretthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12773089562677921118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5299773562524402730.post-31677492764851494172010-11-10T12:36:10.465-08:002010-11-10T12:36:10.465-08:00Susanne, noticed some excellent word choices and p...Susanne, noticed some excellent word choices and phrasing, especially with action verbs and descriptions with -ing suffix. Creates a powerful sense of movement through your lines.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5299773562524402730.post-36676856974000744252010-11-10T10:40:31.747-08:002010-11-10T10:40:31.747-08:00reminded me of marillion's song kayleigh..do y...reminded me of marillion's song kayleigh..do you remember...?<br /><br />nice - i liked your meditative meanderings...<br />in short nights we hugged late coolness...loved this!!Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5299773562524402730.post-82351836333814764252010-11-10T10:32:11.798-08:002010-11-10T10:32:11.798-08:00So vivid! What a feast for the senses. Beaches bri...So vivid! What a feast for the senses. Beaches brimming wetly -- that is absolutely stunning.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5299773562524402730.post-64473950616621276052010-11-10T10:00:12.397-08:002010-11-10T10:00:12.397-08:00A lot of great turns of phrase here. I love the i...A lot of great turns of phrase here. I love the idea of rain pilfering thoughts.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5299773562524402730.post-7491209014955744532010-11-10T09:19:04.097-08:002010-11-10T09:19:04.097-08:00"when summer heat swelled peaches"
Oh, ..."when summer heat swelled peaches"<br /><br />Oh, I can remember. And I love that.L.L. Barkathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13333960142447144678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5299773562524402730.post-54460566933189054282010-11-10T06:02:00.317-08:002010-11-10T06:02:00.317-08:00Well done. I've always liked the use of season...Well done. I've always liked the use of seasons in poetry, and I like that you started with autumn rather than, as is typical, with spring.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5299773562524402730.post-78559298846929625372010-11-10T05:01:47.892-08:002010-11-10T05:01:47.892-08:00"as days gleaned our hours--"
that's..."as days gleaned our hours--"<br />that's lovely and bittersweet.<br />Thanks,<br />KathyKathhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06766959085269574785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5299773562524402730.post-59323823641178966752010-11-09T09:18:53.865-08:002010-11-09T09:18:53.865-08:00lOVELY POEM, such a delight to read :)
Short Poems...lOVELY POEM, such a delight to read :)<br /><a href="http://www.marinelareka.com/" rel="nofollow">Short Poems</a>M. Rekahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12178807956502786062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5299773562524402730.post-2895804881824638892010-11-09T06:17:18.210-08:002010-11-09T06:17:18.210-08:00This poem raises so many questions.
it's awes...This poem raises so many questions.<br /><br />it's awesome!Louise Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5299773562524402730.post-74218718801092026292010-11-08T22:08:52.871-08:002010-11-08T22:08:52.871-08:00I'm making myself "power through"......I'm making myself "power through"...I hadn't written much since July so it feels good to engage in poetry again. One learns by doing.... :)Susanne Barretthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12773089562677921118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5299773562524402730.post-10245945889656272742010-11-08T21:51:21.994-08:002010-11-08T21:51:21.994-08:00You are really powering through this challenge - I...You are really powering through this challenge - I'm so impressed!sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03818420999930644450noreply@blogger.com